This is a story of how I'm unique, Special and different. to me, everybody in this whole entire world is different and unique even if you have a twin you would probably like the same things or not.This story took a lot of process to go through like plan to organize to write.
Kia Ora Riley,
ReplyDeleteWell done on 5 well described and extensive paragraphs. It sounds as though you're quite unique. I like how you considered the readers reaction to your writing, it helped in revealing your humour. I also enjoyed your statement: "All the people in this world are unique" because it showed selflessness. Remember to be aware of sneaking in capital letters through sentences. They should only be at the beginning of a sentence unless the word you're using is a person's name, a specific place or a thing. For example: My name is Sally, and I think I'm special because I was born in Australia. So I used a capital for the beginning of the sentence, for my name, and for Australia because it's a specific place.
Keep practicing though tama, I'm confident you'll get it.
Ka pai kare!
Thank you sally! <3
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