This took alot of steps to finish my piece of writing
1. We had to plan which took 30 mins
2. We made our first draft
Lastly We got it ready for publishing
This was quite hard since it took a long time to publish and make our first draft.Fortunately I got through that hard work and finished. :)
I would appreciate if you guys would leave a positive comment and give me some more feedback. Thanks!
Hey Riley,
ReplyDeleteI can really imagine the character talking because of the way you have used character voice. Your introduction gives me quite a good idea of what is happening too. It would be cool if you could label this post so you can use it as your learning evidence at your parent conference.