DON'T TAKE DOWN MY HOUSE!!!!!!!!
The police started rushing
Into the poverty's houses although the police just busted down people and left the people laying on the floor bleeding there face off.
In fact the government only cared about the rich people not the poor and took down their houses to make way for the builders to build the Olympic park for the Olympians.
Before all of that the mayor built a wall called the wall of shame to protect the jungle and people but the real reason is to hide the poor people and the real Rio because the mayor didn't want the Olympians to see the real Rio because they didn't want them to see coming down the motorway.
because the mayor didn't want the Olympians to see the real Rio because they didn't want them to see coming down the motorway.
In my opinion,i think that the mayor shouldn't of built the wall because there hiding the real Rio and the poor people payed to come there to come to a sweet and wonderful home not a drug dealing poverty home.
By Riley!! :)
Riley your work is very nice
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DeleteHi Riley, thank you for sharing your writing on your blog. I also think you've done a great job expressing your opinion and giving your reasons. Just remember to reread your text before posting it as there are some spelling mistakes and some repetition.
ReplyDeleteBonjour Riley, I like how you talked about how the government wasn't caring for the poor yet that is the real Rio. Do you think you could edit this post and take out the paragraph that started with "because the mayor" Because it is the same as the paragraph before? I love the way you typed your paragraphs and your colors.
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