Hi Riley! This is an amazing blog post! I really like how you ordered your sentences. I enjoyed reading this blog post because the way you transitioned it, and made everything bright and colourful, made the post even more interesting. I like how you put some of your sentences in Maori Language. My favourite food place to go to is also Burger King. What is your favourite type of animal and why, also if you could describe it in one word what would it be?
My favourite type of animal is a zebra because it has black and white stripes on it and it stands out for me so when I look at it,it is just amazing to look at.But if I had to describe it then my word will be outstanding
hi Riley i liked the way you expressed yourself
ReplyDeleteHi Riley I like the way you use maori words.
ReplyDeleteHi Riley I like the way you use maori words.
ReplyDeleteHi Riley!
ReplyDeleteThis is an amazing blog post! I really like how you ordered your sentences. I enjoyed reading this blog post because the way you transitioned it, and made everything bright and colourful, made the post even more interesting. I like how you put some of your sentences in Maori Language. My favourite food place to go to is also Burger King. What is your favourite type of animal and why, also if you could describe it in one word what would it be?
Bella N,
Rimu Class,
Yaldhurst Model School.
Hi Bella N
DeleteMy favourite type of animal is a zebra because it has black and white stripes on it and it stands out for me so when I look at it,it is just amazing to look at.But if I had to describe it then my word will be outstanding
Kind regards
Riley
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